Far more than just a grammar check
Line-by-line edits on language and pacing, plus a detailed strategic memo on every piece.
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Free 30-minute consultation
We'll talk about your background, your goals, and where you are in the application process. No pressure, no sales pitch. Just a conversation to see if we're a fit. Book on Calendly →
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You send your drafts
Personal statement, diversity statement, optional essays, resume, addenda. Whatever you need reviewed.
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I send back two things
First, the document itself with comprehensive line-by-line edits covering pacing, word choice, structure, and tone. Second, a separate detailed memo analyzing the piece as a whole: what's working, what's not, and specific suggestions for strengthening your narrative.
| Service | What's Included | Price |
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| Personal Statement | Line-by-line edits plus detailed memo | $50 |
| Diversity Statement | Line-by-line edits plus detailed memo | $50 |
| Optional Essay | Line-by-line edits plus detailed memo | $35 |
| Full Application Package | PS, diversity, optionals, resume, and addenda review | $110 |
My stats were not the reason I got in.
I went to a T60 undergrad. I have T4 softs, nothing flashy. I am a straight-through applicant with no gap years.
I applied to 16 schools and got into 13, including Yale, Harvard, Chicago, UChicago and many other T14s with full ride offers.
Storytelling got me in. I spent months on my personal statement, rewriting well over 10 times. I'll work as hard to tell your story, too.
Every piece of writing I review gets two deliverables. The first is the document itself, marked up with edits on every paragraph: tightening language, improving pacing, cutting filler, strengthening transitions. The second is a memo, typically 1-2 pages, that steps back and addresses the piece as a whole.